Wednesday, December 26, 2012

Identity Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was not what I was
I'm not what I am

The stream that flows in me
Is no more transparent and polish the pebbles
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 07 October 2017

Pebbles, cowherd, owl, moon, worms, crab, moon and sun -all form a high class Symphony. Amazing.10+

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 October 2017

Heartfelt thanks Sir for giving your valuable time to my poem. Thanks for positive comment.

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eloida Capuno 31 January 2013

At some point in our lives we ask ourselves whobwe are, what are we here for. Your poem captured this inner struggle. Good write as always.

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