I was not what I was
I'm not what I am
The stream that flows in me
Is no more transparent and polish the pebbles
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At some point in our lives we ask ourselves whobwe are, what are we here for. Your poem captured this inner struggle. Good write as always.
Pebbles, cowherd, owl, moon, worms, crab, moon and sun -all form a high class Symphony. Amazing.10+
Heartfelt thanks Sir for giving your valuable time to my poem. Thanks for positive comment.