Identity Comments

It needs more details more drama or more descrptive.

Makes one realize that one is alone ultimately and that an identity is one's only asset... Good one :) ...

one can identify something in your poem

off course we are also losing sir. well written full 10

Really original and strong theme in this poem...something one can identify with. A lot of the time that is the key with poetry... writing what others can identify with. Well done.

sounds like a piece coming from a bitter heart making it really powerful.

really nice poem and you have really interesting titles :)