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Fear, That sucked me up Was a dark black cloud to me ever Once ruled me as a ruling king Forced me to be his slaved queen forever. Fear and the dark cloud- very great poem. tony

Fear is in all of us. Your poem deals with this well.+++10

Expressive and thought provoking. keep it up!

I came to my real I And they all (fears) became the greatest lie Me became the truest truth Evil fears will surely die. i am not afraid......... i have discovered the truth........... only great people like Ghandhi has said such words.. reading through his my experiments with the truth.... it reveals his identity. so also u write at your young age that u have discovered your truth. congratulations dear young poet. tony