Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, March 3, 2010

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Am I ready to leave?
Can I not believe?
Who can help me to be relieved?
Why do I stand as connived?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Chand Shikari 23 July 2010

Am I ready to leave? Can I not believe? Who can help me to be relieved? Why do I stand as connived? ....ideal one....10

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Should be required reading for all those who plan to take the vow of marriage. Well done my friend.

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Dr.ram Mehta 03 March 2010

A good narrative poem with elaborate rhyming

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Gautam Sen 03 March 2010

A good poem of well vowed expression. An apt title to it has worthies to prove the ideal promises made through the entire piece. Rhymes were given much attention throughout your writing and so some words here and there seems to be little awkward - we may swim or we sink...(for us it should be drown na?) However, its a very good poem and reading was a pleasure indeed. Thanks for sharing. Gautam

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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