Ideal Couple Comments

Am I ready to leave? Can I not believe? Who can help me to be relieved? Why do I stand as connived? ....ideal one....10

Should be required reading for all those who plan to take the vow of marriage. Well done my friend.

A good narrative poem with elaborate rhyming

A good poem of well vowed expression. An apt title to it has worthies to prove the ideal promises made through the entire piece. Rhymes were given much attention throughout your writing and so some words here and there seems to be little awkward - we may swim or we sink...(for us it should be drown na?) However, its a very good poem and reading was a pleasure indeed. Thanks for sharing. Gautam