Idea Of You Comments

This is true......nice piece of work...this all what I want to with my beloved.....hehehehehehe......do keep writing.....buck up.....wonderful work.

I think this is a pretty immediate piece. You don't use the cliches of anticipating a lover, but express your own, honest anticipation. There are a few surprises. And your last line, well, that's wonderful!

lovely poem. short and concise, but tells all your longings

Very impassioned write! Nicely done! Lilly :)