alas look at this little circle
that I drew on the sand to be part
of an idea that i just scribbled
of a dream that i have embedded
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your poem has an interesting sense of 'movement' conveyed throughout it. I like the part 'actions are more like growing fingernails' <-I am just not sure what you meant by that. Is it because a fingernail grows straight out and then starts to turn in ward? Anyway, I do like your style. ^_^
thanks Candice. Fingernails ought to be cut when they grow too long dont they?