Tim, you had me captivated with this one. I like the flow of it, the twisting and turning of ideas without falling into the usual traps with this subject. A couple of nits aside (prove in last line of first stanza; should be 'incomprehensible' in line 7) you really have a good one here. Reading on, Lori
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Tim, you had me captivated with this one. I like the flow of it, the twisting and turning of ideas without falling into the usual traps with this subject. A couple of nits aside (prove in last line of first stanza; should be 'incomprehensible' in line 7) you really have a good one here. Reading on, Lori