Monday, July 10, 2006

Idea Of God Comments

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The notion is beyond
intellect -
it’s hard to grasp edge of infinity;
we want one more step
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Tim Gavin
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Lori Boulard 10 July 2006

Tim, you had me captivated with this one. I like the flow of it, the twisting and turning of ideas without falling into the usual traps with this subject. A couple of nits aside (prove in last line of first stanza; should be 'incomprehensible' in line 7) you really have a good one here. Reading on, Lori

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