Monday, September 3, 2007
Idayat Comments
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She was dark,
she was beautiful
She was promising,
What names did you not call poverty
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8/2/2025 12:19:14 PM # 1.0.0
An emotional poem that one must take time with and read slowly. I might suggest in the first line of the second stanza that you separate the word 'maybe' making it 'may be' a little fix if you so choose. This is a strong poem, vivid, and one which stays with me. Light.