Wednesday, December 13, 2017

I'd Like To Comments

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I'd like to dream
all our troubles away.
Dream of a coming day
when the grapes upon the vine
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Smoky Hoss
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Glen Kappy 26 December 2017

hey, smoky! the longing you express in this poem is much like, it seems to me, what I express in my poem titled imagine me. with you in this dream (God's dream!) , glen

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Lyn Paul 13 December 2017

I am a big dreamer. I think it is an answer to staying positive. How the world has changed drastically since our youth. Leaving this world in a dream certainly sounds like a beautiful way to depart. Happy Christmas Smoky

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