Thursday, November 6, 2008

Icy Pearls Comments

Rating: 4.8

Faithfulness is a wish to have
Praying in the altar of divine love
I search forth, from dawn to dusk
To bestow the ideals in your heart
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Rafique Farooqi 28 May 2010

very beautiful and wonderful write

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Cleon Barrett 24 February 2009

This poem is good all because theres a deeper meaning than whats already being said...It shows great symbolism to...i give it 4 stars out of 5

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Li Away 22 November 2008

that was lovely to read

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Tj Becker 16 November 2008

The title is very alluring, pulling the reader into your wonderful work of art. A poetic artist you are and among the best. This one was one of my favorites. A great read

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Ashley Burnam 13 November 2008

I will agree with anyone that says its a very well written but i think you should reach out to the world you least understand and see hwo that effects your writing. Lovely beyong comparison though.

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Edgar Andrade Baguio 12 November 2008

I felt colder with those hot lines. '...Continuous bleeding..'.I wonder if the pearls crack when it is below zero. Nice blending of thoughts to bring to higher state of life. Very imploring

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Elena Winters 12 November 2008

enjoyed your writing portrayed beautifully great job

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Sydney Love 11 November 2008

great poem! very reflective and beautifully written. well done

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Antonio Liao 10 November 2008

too sweet in thy soul, so critical to analyst, so poetic in our language, so reflective to feel, a poem that move our dream of reality, at this moment of time..... a very a beautiful indeed that lives always in my memories.... Thank you... God bless a 10 point for you

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Jerry Abrahamson 10 November 2008

A very nice poem. Keep writing.

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Kesav Easwaran 10 November 2008

a poem very different from many of your writes...is very deep...honestly thought out and written 10

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David Paigneau 10 November 2008

Like several little stories following each other, several feelings expressed, in a very unique and touching way, I'd say very peaceful poem, beautiful one

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Min Sia 10 November 2008

No doubt..it's included in the top 500 poems..It's beautiful! ! Great work! ! !

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Shruti Suresh 10 November 2008

its like each verse is a different pearl, strung together to make a beautiful necklace. pl read my new one 'finally, a goodbye'

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Kaizer Dublin 09 November 2008

nice composition... good work on emotions... Overall: Nice lyric poem, though some unclear persona within your work....

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Mark Nwagwu 09 November 2008

lyrical, CT, musical, enjoyable. filling

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Blue Horizon 09 November 2008

i dont know my words may seem few or perhaps not enough but what u've written seemed to me pure literature...every line has a different n definite significance 'Barren beauty, bewildered in the thoughts of He' search for faithfulness....a tinge of sadness throughout da poem...references...its a beautiful poem.

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Drake Kinkaid 09 November 2008

Very nice Your words are easy on the eyes

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Bob Blackwell 09 November 2008

Beautiful writing, beautiful poem.

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Macklin MacKenzie 09 November 2008

WOW. that was a truly beautiful poem. So natural in essence, so deep in meaning. I LOVE it. I will look forward to your next composition.

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