Faithfulness is a wish to have
Praying in the altar of divine love
I search forth, from dawn to dusk
To bestow the ideals in your heart
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This poem is good all because theres a deeper meaning than whats already being said...It shows great symbolism to...i give it 4 stars out of 5
The title is very alluring, pulling the reader into your wonderful work of art. A poetic artist you are and among the best. This one was one of my favorites. A great read
I will agree with anyone that says its a very well written but i think you should reach out to the world you least understand and see hwo that effects your writing. Lovely beyong comparison though.
I felt colder with those hot lines. '...Continuous bleeding..'.I wonder if the pearls crack when it is below zero. Nice blending of thoughts to bring to higher state of life. Very imploring
great poem! very reflective and beautifully written. well done
too sweet in thy soul, so critical to analyst, so poetic in our language, so reflective to feel, a poem that move our dream of reality, at this moment of time..... a very a beautiful indeed that lives always in my memories.... Thank you... God bless a 10 point for you
a poem very different from many of your writes...is very deep...honestly thought out and written 10
Like several little stories following each other, several feelings expressed, in a very unique and touching way, I'd say very peaceful poem, beautiful one
No doubt..it's included in the top 500 poems..It's beautiful! ! Great work! ! !
its like each verse is a different pearl, strung together to make a beautiful necklace. pl read my new one 'finally, a goodbye'
nice composition... good work on emotions... Overall: Nice lyric poem, though some unclear persona within your work....
i dont know my words may seem few or perhaps not enough but what u've written seemed to me pure literature...every line has a different n definite significance 'Barren beauty, bewildered in the thoughts of He' search for faithfulness....a tinge of sadness throughout da poem...references...its a beautiful poem.
WOW. that was a truly beautiful poem. So natural in essence, so deep in meaning. I LOVE it. I will look forward to your next composition.
very beautiful and wonderful write