Tuesday, June 8, 2010

Icon Of Will…..0806 Comments

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Pointing dishes at galactic streams.
Sighing stars, echo faintly screams.

Deep in vistas amid glimmering clouds,
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Subbaraman N V 12 July 2010

A great write that I really enjoyed! Thanks for sharing.

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Nazia Usmani 03 July 2010

... lovely esp the ending.. trivial i stand....an icon of will in the sand.... hmmm it tells alll.... a doctor myself n tat too kashmiri.....keep writing with an iconic will. regards daffodil tears

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 08 June 2010

A profound poem that words are drawn from the depth of the author's being! Inspie, of life's woes, puny, naked, trival I stand An icon [ an image] of will in so much sand An excellent poem a 10+++ [ problem with the voter register]

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