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great! i like the images

Fran this is a stunning - absolutely stunning. I can see every image as you describe it - with just enough detail to allow my imagination free rein. A beautifully written poem, from the clever title to the stanza that blew me away: 'The sun rises and glares at the ice, casting its yellow eye over the arrogant brittleness that dares to challenge it. Slowly, slowly, like truth amongst lies it wins through.' You are quite a poet. Congratulations on a superb effort. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

What a glorious descriptive piece to give us a glimpse into your world Fran.. HG: -) xx