Sunday, December 22, 2013

Icicles Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a night of icy rain
Icicles jingle on my window
Like musical notes
Of silvery crescendo
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Savita Tyagi
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Bri Edwards 02 December 2016

icicles looks 'funny' to me. i think i never spell it correctly for some reason! (thanks, Google) i choose definition #1, but the others are interesting in light of the source of icicles! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - af·flu·ent ˈaflo͞oənt, əˈflo͞oənt/ adjective adjective: affluent 1. (especially of a group or area) having a great deal of money; wealthy. the affluent societies of the western world synonyms: wealthy, rich, prosperous, well off, moneyed, well-to-do; More propertied, substantial, of means, of substance, plutocratic; informal well heeled**********, rolling in it, made of money, filthy rich, stinking rich, loaded, on easy street; upper-class, upscale the affluent families of Newport antonyms: poor, impoverished 2. archaic (of water) flowing freely or in great quantity. noun archaic noun: affluent; plural noun: affluents 1. a tributary stream. ===================================== favorite stanza: Sky above pink and lucent Earth beneath glistening affluent with silken pearls Glowing in Christmas light this poem shall go into Section A of December 2016's showcase. and i'll add your note (i see after the date of the poem) as a Poet's Note. thanks, Savita bri :) ********* my shoes are heeled well enough, but i'm far from affluent.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 September 2014

This the holy night of Pure beauteous calm In love's dripping of Icicles formed May peace be upon all. Beuatiful, beautiful and beautiful

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Valsa George 04 January 2014

..A terrific write.... Savita! ! Beautiful imagery painted in words of a beauteous winter night! For this I award you full marks!

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Roseann Shawiak 24 December 2013

Fantastic imagery of winter beauty in nature and decorated in Christmas peace. Love it! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 22 December 2013

Beautiful winter scenes! ! spectacular! !

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