Sunday, June 28, 2020

Icecube Swan Comments

Rating: 5.0

plop!
one cube of ice
SPLASH
FIZZZzzzz
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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 July 2020

Wonderful poem, beautiful alliteration, so nice to read the poem time and again

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 June 2020

swan swims in crystalline sea of life!

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Rajendran muthiah 29 June 2020

What a use of onamatopoic words A few poets can do it.

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