Wednesday, March 15, 2006
Iceberg Comments
Rating: ★4.2
Sometimes I look at my life
And see Im outside looking in
Hovering above that bubble
In observation of my own sins.
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Gina Onyemaechi
15 March 2006
And what a clever running-on image to crown all that imagery. Nice reading you again, Tara. Warmly, Gina.
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Duncan Wyllie
15 March 2006
What power contained.Really captivating and good use of metaphor in this one.Love Duncan
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7/26/2025 12:31:33 AM # 1.0.0
The anger and energy in this are the iceberg. Thanks for showing us the tip. The meter perhaps stumbled a little, but what iceberg is a perfect icecube? Wonderful. -chuck