Here on the surface of the sun
Its hard to remember what you were concerned over
Ten thousand degrees or more
Inside hosts of hot-house cooks abound
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Thought-provoking AND scientifically accurate (re sunspots being cooler) ! Nicely done! -chuck
The intensity of fire and ice - an impressive surrealist piece of whimsy with a down to earth coda. Love this. Allie xxxx
I love the title Tailor, one would think of ice water. Excellent poem, I like it very much.---Melvina---
Tailor, indeed, you have painted a truly beautiful poem here.
Excellent, and very wry humor. Fire and ice water - loved it. - Will
A WEE TASTE OF TH' CONTEMPORARY ABSTRACT, Mr. Bell! I LIKE IT A LOT...CLEVER & IMAGINEATIVE INDEED....FJR
This has a very individual style Tailor Thankyou Love duncan X
this one here is on my list of things i like but i dont know why
Well I love the obscurity - so many meanings possible. Good poem, Steve
I believe this is again in the abstract zone--I like it---Melvina
Tailor - maybe you're suffering from a little heat stroke? lol! Interesting perspective, here. Makes you wonder..................... Linda
Takes me away to that feeling of when we used to have summers in England... neat. atmospheric write, love the end touch. t x
a good write Enjoyed