Sunday, September 3, 2006

Ice Water Comments

Rating: 4.9

Here on the surface of the sun
Its hard to remember what you were concerned over
Ten thousand degrees or more
Inside hosts of hot-house cooks abound
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Tailor Bell
COMMENTS
Heather Wilkins 24 September 2013

a good write Enjoyed

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Heather Wilkins 24 September 2013

a good write Enjoyed

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Chuck Audette 12 June 2009

Thought-provoking AND scientifically accurate (re sunspots being cooler) ! Nicely done! -chuck

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Risha : Ahmed 18 July 2007

This poem also has that distinct flavour. A unique idea.

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Alison Cassidy 29 June 2007

The intensity of fire and ice - an impressive surrealist piece of whimsy with a down to earth coda. Love this. Allie xxxx

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Melvina Germain 18 March 2007

I love the title Tailor, one would think of ice water. Excellent poem, I like it very much.---Melvina---

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Lola Cunningham 16 March 2007

Tailor, indeed, you have painted a truly beautiful poem here.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 06 October 2006

i prefer the south pole. good one tailor.

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Will Barber 28 September 2006

Excellent, and very wry humor. Fire and ice water - loved it. - Will

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 11 September 2006

A WEE TASTE OF TH' CONTEMPORARY ABSTRACT, Mr. Bell! I LIKE IT A LOT...CLEVER & IMAGINEATIVE INDEED....FJR

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Patricia Gale 09 September 2006

Ah the grander of the Tailor Bell style!

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Duncan Wyllie 06 September 2006

This has a very individual style Tailor Thankyou Love duncan X

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fanniesson - 06 September 2006

this one here is on my list of things i like but i dont know why

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Steve Hagget 05 September 2006

Well I love the obscurity - so many meanings possible. Good poem, Steve

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Melvina Germain 04 September 2006

I believe this is again in the abstract zone--I like it---Melvina

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Linda Ori 04 September 2006

Tailor - maybe you're suffering from a little heat stroke? lol! Interesting perspective, here. Makes you wonder..................... Linda

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Takes me away to that feeling of when we used to have summers in England... neat. atmospheric write, love the end touch. t x

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William Jackson 04 September 2006

Nice write. Zaney! I like it!

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