Ice Tears Comments

Nice poem. Cute metaphor. Lovely lines. 10 with pleasure.

'Ice Tears', winter words indeed, You create very memorable moods. Your work has my applause. Kind regards, Sandra

Wow Asif Bhai... It's indeed a lovely write... Soo passionate and directly pierces the heart... Thanks for sharing...10 +++++

Beggar of love is always a great lover.Great writes Asif.

Im so moved by your poems asif.. I get goos bumps when i read them.. you write them so well.....and i really felt the poem, know what i mean? anyways..keep up ur hard n gud work

Nicely writin... Showing yer deep emotions... Gud work

Asif This poem has passionate imagery and an excellent flow to it. I love the literation e.g. whispering whisps and lines such as 'gather the rusted gold of my broken life'. Such a plea surely can not be ignored. Excellent! Karin Anderson

hey asif dont u worry ice tears will soon become warm ones nice write ++++++10 anju

hot tears shed for love turning into unnoticed cold ice...good write, Aijaz...emotional expressive...10