Saturday, January 17, 2009

.ice Storm Chili Comments

Rating: 3.6

We rose that day, no power at all
The whole county stymied from ice and snow
The central heat, though gas, no good
For, without the “juice, ” it would not go
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C R Clark
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Dave Dafes 07 March 2011

The imagery in this poem is so vivid that i felt the chill as if i was experiencing the winter.. It is great to read...

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Andrew Blakemore 28 January 2009

A lovely story Richard, a very descriptive piece of work. I was shivering as I read it! Best wishes, Andrew

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 23 January 2009

Now Richard, you said you had not camped out all year and here God allowed it in your living room. Sounded great! In fact, that's a new poem starter for you. Camping in the LR (living room instead of the RV) . I enjoyed, Loyd

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Thad Wilk 19 January 2009

Glad to hear you made it through alright, that ice storm chili - saved the night! Great read Richard! ! *10*! Friend Thad

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Rico Avila 18 January 2009

I agree, sometimes better than that hot cup of cocoa.

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Ivor Hogg 17 January 2009

I can almost smell that chilli. WE have had a few powercuts of shprt duratio but I quite enjoy writing by candle night Occasionally

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So real...I was there with you and felt the love...enjoyed the chili....10! (now I intrude and ask you to visit my 'On A Winter Day'...

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Tsira Goge 17 January 2009

Exotic and beautiful 'history-adventure...'10. Tsira

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Fiona Davidson 17 January 2009

Ain't nothing like a good chili anytime....my favourite food...10+++ for this grest poem...Fi

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