Sunday, August 8, 2021

Ice Cream And Independence Comments

Rating: 5.0

What is independence?
Is it having no dependence?
Or our own flag's fragrance?
But it is surely something teenagers do think.
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Bharati Nayak 10 August 2021

With independence also come the responsibility.A great poem indeed!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 August 2021

Independence means writing freely, writing all I wish to write, what in my mind resides, you wrote a fascinating poem about Independence, enjoyed readung this and this poem goes to My Favourites! 5 Stars fullest for your biggest ice cream! treat yourself.Cute pictured added!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 August 2021

An honest poem Punya! Loved the last two lines! It rings a bell! ....top stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 August 2021

It means eating ice cream in the rain, Then going to the doctor with throat pain!

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Indira Renganathan 08 August 2021

A lovely amusing poem....full score

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