Thursday, February 21, 2013

Ice Cream! Comments

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Leave me in my dream land,
Where I can swim in the ice cream ponds,
The vanilla is the sweetest of all,
The smell of chocolate keeps me in spell.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Gary James Smith 26 February 2013

Now I'm wishing that I had an ice cream cone...........very well written.......leaves one salvitating..........in fact this very day I was at the grocery store pondering whether to buy a tub of ice cream or not, but the high price took my craving away........oh well............waiting for the discounted price.........

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Chandra Thiagarajan 24 February 2013

YES! We'll leave you in your dreamland to swim in the ice-cream ponds! ! THIS BEAUTIFUL POEM TOOK US ALSO ALONG FOR THE SWIM AND WE TOO RELISHED IT ! !

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