Saturday, February 8, 2020

Ice Cold Revenge Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'll be away from work for some time,
Simply abroad to hunt someone.
A ghost from my past of a previous life,
I won't stop till my deed is done.
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Shaun Cronick
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Soran M. H 08 February 2020

very fantasy world has been created in this lovely stanzas, I know it is not real, but our beloved poet is so anxious here, it is amazing some lines gives us a joke, and some others serious, I hope Shaun get calmer soon by giving his excellent poem very awesome 10/10

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Shaun Cronick 08 February 2020

Thanks Soran and you've hit the nail on the head by saying not real and jokey, which it's meant to be. Got the idea from an old Lee Marvin movie called Point Blank a guy named Walker seeking endless retribution and is a bit surreal (is he dead? A ghost seeking revenge?) Great movie. And thanks Soran for your kind comment.Take care.And there's a poem about Audrey Hepburn coming.

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