Your eyes
So sweet
And sincere
They change
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Wow, it is amazing how eyes can say so many things, it is also amazing how you can put it into words... Good write Allison.
Simple, heartfelt, with a nice rhythm, scheme, and rhyming pattern. Everything a poem should be. And I felt personally attached to it with my blue eyes. Still something I could not place nor name was missing. 9/10
It's Intresting, Allison. It's nice to read one's besides my own writing, Expecialy from dark to something witch seems to be the complete opposite.
This just what i needed: D