Tuesday, October 11, 2005

Icarus Of America Comments

Rating: 4.2

America the Proud stands tall
His states united under an Icarean flag
A cliché of colors flashing his creed
Snapping wildly with the motto of his men:
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Lori Boulard
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Moon Batchelder 30 January 2007

beauty of a read here...the concise and insightful words of a seer...

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Declan McHenry 14 January 2007

Whoa! ! ! Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Cutting Lori. Cutting.

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Joseph Daly 26 November 2005

I Like this very much Lori. It is hard to write political poetry without falling in to cliches. The use of Icarus as a metaphor is excellent and shows a deep insightful approach. All the best Denis Joe

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Peter A. Crowther 20 October 2005

Good thoughtful poem. Reminds me of the 'rise and fall of the ten thousand things'.

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Uriah Hamilton 11 October 2005

A meaningful poem of political thought.

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