Sunday, February 3, 2008

Icarus Comments

Rating: 5.0

It wasn’t the heat
turned her bones
to water
her wings
...
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shel cope
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Ulrike Gerbig 24 February 2008

I like this poem! Check out my 'Icarus, female'...I will re-post it for you. U.

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Nomi Mas 21 February 2008

great work. thanks

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Simone Inez Harriman 17 February 2008

WOW... nice poem. Much enjoyed!

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Original Unknown Girl 14 February 2008

This is beautiful, I love the theme of it. There are a lot of fools about though it seems! Perhaps it's not foolishness, more fear that stops us flying? Just a thought... HG: -) xx

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Tan Morgan 12 February 2008

Very quotable!

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This poem totally works. It's words are plain, it's style simple, but it's message is strong. I'm glad I read this, because I found such enjoyment in doing so.

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