It wasn’t the heat
turned her bones
to water
her wings
...
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This is beautiful, I love the theme of it. There are a lot of fools about though it seems! Perhaps it's not foolishness, more fear that stops us flying? Just a thought... HG: -) xx
This poem totally works. It's words are plain, it's style simple, but it's message is strong. I'm glad I read this, because I found such enjoyment in doing so.
I like this poem! Check out my 'Icarus, female'...I will re-post it for you. U.