Saturday, January 10, 2009

Iambic Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I n my soul which is distressed
A t all times you have been the best
M iracle that happened to me
B lessed with it, i hope again i`ll be
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Tareq Jalabi
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Marieta Maglas 16 November 2010

wonderful acrostic poem about love...thank you for sharing

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wow so beautiful and touching 10 <3 ed It! ! !

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kunjubi Varghese 22 October 2010

Blue eyes! ! Poetry is the spontaneous flow of welled up emotions in the heart and the overflow becomes poems delectable to the soul. When you experiment such emotions to fix them in certain parameters like rhymes, meters and bla- bla, the soul of the poem will be lost to technicalities and becomes.pallid and insipid. Don't you ever try that except to please your academicians, or satisfy your curiosity in your quest.. Poet is not at all a scientist seeking the chemistry and physics of human nature. He is a professor of the HEART, and not a Cardiologist. Cheers

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 15 September 2009

Well, the idea is unique, the title is quite catching. You linked one of the most important poetry Characteristics with love, as if you are simply saying, a poet is just human who can fall in love and “write” about it. Well done

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Sherri Coulter 12 September 2009

i have read you loud and clear, and been moved to tears...........this one my favorite.10+++++

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Emma Fellers 05 March 2009

This is a very good poem! Can't wait till you write another one. ^-^

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Jazzmine Virden 05 March 2009

this is an awesome peom i love it!

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Megan R 04 March 2009

I loved this poem. The words flowed so well.

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Brenda Tamayo 04 March 2009

You understand Iambic Pentameter more than I do. This poem is cute. We are working on acrostic poetry at the moment in my English class. I'm sure my teacher would give you and A+ :)

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Christina Phan 04 March 2009

wow i luv it 11+ keep doing wht u doing

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Lynda Robson 04 March 2009

Well penned piece, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 03 March 2009

You did really good to write that. I don't think I could.

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This is a very good acrostic poem-very lovely sentiment.A ten from me! ! ! ! !

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Jasmine B 03 March 2009

nice poem....read mind....

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 03 March 2009

I loved the way you set this up! I thought it was pretty cool and creative! It turned out to be really good in the end too. Good write Scale1-10...10!

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Evaughn Gray 03 March 2009

this has a very good flow. i love the way you form your words.. this poem is utterly beautiful on my behalf ~Hazel G.E

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Sarah 03 March 2009

this is lyk awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 great write. u get a 10 from me!

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Rosalita Fernandez 03 March 2009

Cleverly done, beautifully written

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something different i like it not many people at my school are kids my age learn to appreciate poetry but i have Its great

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Reshma Ramesh 07 February 2009

whoa! ! something new to me...................well done

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