Iam Thecover In The Lonely Nights... Comments

POETS STAND HERE IS ‘EMPATHY’ Excellent reading. Ten. dr. sakti Cordially invite to my page [poem] read / comment and…. ds

'LIKE THE DOVES WILL CARRY YOU BACK TO HOME' Rachel Ann Butler

this poem is filled with emotion and passion.. very much enjoyed reading it! 10 +

in this poem, i see so much of myself and of the love that protects me. thank you for finding the words and putting them together to translate something so beautiful. much gratitude to you!

An intellectualy stimulating piece.

This whole piece slowly builds on in intensity, to some higher ideals against the odds. Still a fantasy, with touches of reality(The begger girl, Wounded soldier) , it has some thing noble to tell.10

thanks.will try to make them shorter.i just write my poems the wat i write them, i express myself my own way, you express your poems short n to the point...thats what makes us different yet share the same passion....true..oh i gave this poem a 10, its well deserved

this is so much from the heart & soul :)

Ya salam ya Tamara, there is no doubt that you are the queen of poets

passionate write.........but why u shouting?

Meaningfull words. A beautiful read.

first: never good to write in caps.. difficult to read.. hurt the eyes.. second................. Lady you have a big heart. that outshines everything else..10+++++++++++

thanks Mrs Nutty..it is ok dear i said in my previous comment that i didnot mean to put it in cap..it was my first poem and i was even newly to typing so i didnot make any change when i post here..so thanks for all concerns..just to know that i love beauty..and want always to make my poem very beautifful in shape and content but here no choice on PH..regards and thanks friends

TAMARA YOUR POEM WAS WONDERFUL PLEASE DONT TAKE THIS THE WRONG WAY BUT KALE, RAY EVYAN AND RAVI HAVE SAID THE TRUTH LOOSE THE CAPS &SPACES AND FIX THE MISTAKES AND YOU'LL HAVE A MASTERPIECE I HAD A VERY GOOD FRIEND ON PH WHEN I FIRST STARTED BECAUSE I TO USED ALL CAPS AND SPACES. I CHANGED MY STYLE AND IT PAID OFF. GLAD I READ YOUR POEM WILL READ MORE.

Very touching and beautiful in its own way. A poem of many tears. But solace is offered as well. Kind regards, Sandra

OMG! ! ! .....u absolutely took my breath away... that was a beautiful read....i know for sure that ur more talented than u think u r......love ur work.... :) keep rocking...! ! ! ! ! ! !

I agree with Rajkumar about the all caps... although I loved the poem itself, the format in which it was represented is a throw-off. The words have been really spread out and break up flow, but other than that... Some really inspiring lines, particularly the empathetic verse: 'your tears filled my eyes/and in my turn started to cry' Extremely vivid, a strong voice of passion that does not go unheard. Well done.

DEAR tAMARA, This is a nice tribute to Florence Nightingale or for that matter any social worker.Some lines attract attention: 'your tears filled my eyes and in my turn started to cry' OR 'when the sky will be mean I'm the rain in your desert the shiny sun in a stormy way I'm the cover in the lonely nights' 1) The poem could have been abridged, in particular, the narratives in the third paragraph 2) In line four 'apart 'should be 'a part' 3) Use of all caps have not increased the appeal of the poem. In now-a-days mostly smaller letters are used. May I request you to think it over and submit a revised copy with a more slim and trim look? This is my suggestion only choice is yours. Otherwise I liked the poem-Rajkumar

A full dose of hope Tamara

Once I started reading these verses didn't feel as if I wanted to stop reading them. These verses are so full of meaning and the flowy flow of your writing makes it a wonderful thing to read.