Tuesday, December 23, 2008

Iam Made Of You! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Me, I am made of little things,
choc o chips, stems of tulips,
made of pages from a book
sure, come and take a look!
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Reshma Ramesh
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Patti Masterman 10 February 2009

I think you are made of a little bit of everything (not a bad way to be) Very fun poem; thanks for writing.

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Ted Sheridan 28 December 2008

I really liked this one very much! It is very well crafted.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 28 December 2008

Well every on needs a sweet girl, choc chip too, can not get better than that..: -) Andrew 10

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Kesav Easwaran 27 December 2008

a good poem in rhythm made of strong emotional love...well done, Reshma...10

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Sadiqullah Khan 26 December 2008

some impersonal confessions, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,10

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Greenwolfe 1962 25 December 2008

I agree with Marria. This is an awesome poem. I gave it a 10. I will also take it as a favorite. This was creativity at its best. Marvelous! Just Marvelous! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! GW62

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Fay Slimm 24 December 2008

I love this one Reshma - - it sings along the lines and of course it is a beautiful love poem too....... top marks for the ingenuity.... from Fay.

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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