Me, I am made of little things,
choc o chips, stems of tulips,
made of pages from a book
sure, come and take a look!
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Well every on needs a sweet girl, choc chip too, can not get better than that..: -) Andrew 10
a good poem in rhythm made of strong emotional love...well done, Reshma...10
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I agree with Marria. This is an awesome poem. I gave it a 10. I will also take it as a favorite. This was creativity at its best. Marvelous! Just Marvelous! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! GW62
I love this one Reshma - - it sings along the lines and of course it is a beautiful love poem too....... top marks for the ingenuity.... from Fay.
I think you are made of a little bit of everything (not a bad way to be) Very fun poem; thanks for writing.