Sunday, December 4, 2005

I Yearn For You Comments

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Can you not see, I yearn for you?
My heat leaps into my mouth when you walk by,
the fires of passion, burn under my skin,
the colour drains from my face,
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Steve Armstrong
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Vanessa Brown 21 April 2006

awww how sad: o(ive felt like that before, that someone walks by and never spares you a glance, and it makes you feel so horrible. hope she falls for u to stop you falling into the dark: o)

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Ernestine Northover 05 December 2005

A dream of rejection - it bites at our immortal souls. Well written. Love Ernestine XXX

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Amberlee Spurling 04 December 2005

haha good poem...read mine about 'Do You Want Me'...i think that would fit nicly

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