I walked along the shoreline
As the ocean looked so blue,
The seagulls called upon the wind
Above me as they flew,
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Beautiful rendition of words. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Andrew.
I knew my love did stay, I wrote her name upon the sand But waves washed it away. love and relationships are always a mystery. thank u dear poet. tony
Love, as timeless as it is fleeing! Eloquently narated, Andrew. Thank you
And I shan't forget that day, I wrote her name upon the sand But waves washed it away. Sad and touching, a very impressive poem.
Time and tide waits for no one but love endures..a ten...
A lovely poem Andy, it is symbolic of a love that came and went written so well by you, thanks, 10 Lynda xx
a nice musical poem sad yet romantic in neat rhyming scheme...good work, Andrew...10
You have written her name on sand, but is free ignored your sincerity. But her name at you is written to heart.... And until then not erased this an inscription... Thanks that have divided this thin feeling in it a poem... / Andrew, thanks for comments.../ Tsira
The name Andrew Blakemore seems so familiar to me...Anyway, I can see why this was picked was a great poem, it's got a nice flow, nice repetition and rhyme scheme X's and O's
Your love it still there Andrew within the grains of tiny moments that we call time! ! ! Love duncan X
Splendid, just splendid. I loved the two lines at the end of each verse they were so moving. Well done. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
This is beautiful also...I can envision this so clearly. Once again, your style is my favorite and your writings are clearly, concisely expressed. Thank you....
This is lovely. Kind of reminds me of a poem by a British poet I once read. Nice job, :)
Beautiful song of love. I wish someone sets this poem to music and sings…