Friday, December 14, 2007

I Wrote Her Name Upon The Sand Comments

Rating: 4.9

I walked along the shoreline
As the ocean looked so blue,
The seagulls called upon the wind
Above me as they flew,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Unnikrishnan E S 15 June 2021

Beautiful song of love. I wish someone sets this poem to music and sings…

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Chinedu Dike 30 October 2019

Beautiful rendition of words. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Andrew.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 June 2019

I knew my love did stay, I wrote her name upon the sand But waves washed it away. love and relationships are always a mystery. thank u dear poet. tony

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Terry Dawson 22 April 2018

Love, as timeless as it is fleeing! Eloquently narated, Andrew. Thank you

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Akhtar Jawad 04 April 2018

And I shan't forget that day, I wrote her name upon the sand But waves washed it away. Sad and touching, a very impressive poem.

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Time and tide waits for no one but love endures..a ten...

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Lynda Robson 14 March 2009

A lovely poem Andy, it is symbolic of a love that came and went written so well by you, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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Kesav Easwaran 13 December 2008

a nice musical poem sad yet romantic in neat rhyming scheme...good work, Andrew...10

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Tsira Goge 13 November 2008

You have written her name on sand, but is free ignored your sincerity. But her name at you is written to heart.... And until then not erased this an inscription... Thanks that have divided this thin feeling in it a poem... / Andrew, thanks for comments.../ Tsira

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Delilah Miller 28 April 2008

The name Andrew Blakemore seems so familiar to me...Anyway, I can see why this was picked was a great poem, it's got a nice flow, nice repetition and rhyme scheme X's and O's

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Duncan Wyllie 11 March 2008

Your love it still there Andrew within the grains of tiny moments that we call time! ! ! Love duncan X

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Ernestine Northover 10 March 2008

Splendid, just splendid. I loved the two lines at the end of each verse they were so moving. Well done. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Always Fine 22 February 2008

This is a beautiful poem.

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Jeannie Ann Clark 22 December 2007

This is beautiful also...I can envision this so clearly. Once again, your style is my favorite and your writings are clearly, concisely expressed. Thank you....

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Thad Wilk 14 December 2007

A truly wonderful write Andrew! ! *10*! ! !

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Lucianne Fasolo 14 December 2007

This is lovely. Kind of reminds me of a poem by a British poet I once read. Nice job, :)

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Ricky Owen 14 December 2007

Really enjoyed it, Great write Nice one Kindest Regards Ricky

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