Tuesday, July 29, 2008

I Wrote A Song Comments

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I wrote a song
cause i wanted to see what's wrong
Why there is so much war?
people should love instead of abhor.
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aziz soubai
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Brian Hinckley 04 August 2008

When people stand up for what is right and decent, change comes. We stand idle and let those that should not be making the choices for us decide our fates. That needs to change.

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Eman Awad 01 August 2008

you simply put the thought in verse world in peace? ? that's the Utopia my friend but to the poem it's beautiful i liked it Eman Awad

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Papillon Alamy 31 July 2008

we have to write about that more and more 'cuz wars are increasing amazingly! ! ! I've also written about wars it would be a plaisir for me if you comment some of my poems.

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