Wednesday, September 9, 2015

I Wrote A Poem On A Butterfly's Wings Comments

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As she fluttered by,
The words were
Like lacy snow flakes, falling from the sky.
A lovely canvas were her wings in delicate blue,
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Roseann Shawiak 10 September 2015

Your title drew me in, once I started reading I was enthralled with your lovely imagery, all types of birds singing and joining in the chorus, even the roses, daffodils, lilacs and dandelions joined in. Very beautiful picture of nature you have painted here in your poem. Loved it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 09 September 2015

The words were sentimental and most certainly true A lovely poem with lovely imagery. Loved reading the poem,

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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