Sunday, May 28, 2006

~i Write These Words For You~ Comments

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If you could heal a thousand souls
with the words you write today
would you put your pen to test?
Would you know just what to say?
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Mary Nagy
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Joseph Daly 29 May 2006

A wonderful piece Mary. I can tolerate ryhme when it is employed to grand effect and here it is done so. the emotion of the work's theme, is amply complimented by the structure.

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Ernestine Northover 29 May 2006

Your a prolific writer Mary, and always from the heart. Love Ernestine XXX

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Another beautiful write from the awesome pen of a beautiful heart.

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trisha evensen 28 May 2006

Very nice poetry Mary love Trisha

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Lylyanna Pilewski 28 May 2006

oooooooo a little intensesity i like it awesome job. Lylyanna

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