I write poetry
Way back then when young
So damn innocent
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Innocent and young, poetry like the fresh green sprout.......10
Richard--the sparseness of your words empower the poignancy of this piece. Top score and to my favorites
Susan, your very positive constructive criticism means so very much to me. It inspires me to continue writing in the very succinct style. THX so much for the top score and for adding it to your favourites!
No doubt, dear poet, Poetry is innocence of words….
And that innocence sometimes exposes us unfavourable conditions. THX so much, Poet Menon, for reading and commenting.