I Write Because I Can Comments

i llove this poem because it is so strong just like you and it saids so much. keep up the good job. love you sis deb

A good writer is one that speaks their peace, regardless of whether or not your peace will be the Reader's peace...and that appears to be the kind of writer you are! Smooth stanzaic structure affords a very comely & mellifluous read here. Nice Work... FjR

can't think of a better reason to write, myself... This flows very well. the rhymes come off naturally, and the message is delivered tersely, with a refreshing bit of whimsy. Fine work, imho.