Monday, December 7, 2015

I Write Comments

Rating: 5.0

I write to calm the roar
That inside the heart soars
The words I write melt the snow
That covers the storm below
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2021

I sincerely appreciate your view points...5 stars

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Lawerence Mize 13 September 2016

Loved reading this poem. Mirrors how I feel when I write. Thanks for sharing.

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Salihu Mahe 05 February 2016

I must write Or my heart would burst For writing is to me What flow is to the sea Wonderful poem that is truthful to a poet

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Valsa George 03 February 2016

Freedom tastes sweet That comes from unburdening self When one gives vent to the pent up feelings through words, a great burden is removed and one feels so light with a new sense of freedom overpowering him/her! Beautifully expressed Nosheen!

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Bursting with a beauty that is both creative and compelling. Lovely lines my friend. I join you in celebrating the therapeutic miracle of writing!

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2016

I write to calm the roar That inside the heart soars The words I write melt the snow That covers the storm below. how true dear poetes.. i too am writing to calm my mind. mind is a world of its own, very mysterious are the activities of the mind. thank you for this p oem, , tony

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Manonton Dalan 07 January 2016

writing for me calms my mind for I hear these words like bees

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Akhtar Jawad 24 December 2015

I must write Or my heart would burst For writing is to me What flow is to the sea. A nicely written poem in Nausheen's own specific style.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 December 2015

As though a new born when, the right thing is done. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 07 December 2015

beautiful poem, must be something great that inspiring your writing

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 07 December 2015

A beautiful expression of sentiment. Exceptional...10 +++

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Nosheen Irfan 07 December 2015

Thank you so much james for appreciation.

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