Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, July 17, 2014

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Poetry is in my blood
I consider it as food
Ingredient for nourishment
For some important movement
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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A poem about writing, why people write and the enjoyment of writing, which as he describes is natural. Joshua FordLess than a minute ago ' I write' is a simple poem with a clear meaning, describing how natural poetry is to him, comparing to being a part of him as his body. There are five stanzas with four lines each and there is a near rhyming pattern of a, a, b, b, which gives the poem structure. At times i feel like he has forced words in to fit, or either chosen words merely on their accessibility to the poem, than the actual creative and moral effect. At times it loses interest and is hard to understand. The imagery is very good, using metaphors to get the message it across. The poem was good and the meaning was very clear. :)

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Poetry is in my blood I consider it as food Ingredient for nourishment

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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