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beauty lies deep within each person. a good read

All we are concerned with outward beauty and this makes blind to whatever lies deep in human soul....the beauty that is immortal and timeless...I think this is the powerful theme of this narrative poem.

A tragic story brilliantly written with intense emotional impact. Well done.

I wish the poem is not auto biographical, it is fictional, with fictional characters, taking the as not real i like the story i mean the concept, and the expression is up to date, modern....rest of the things like agree with jahan zeb.

Is there anything that can be called beautiful? If yes my dear Farah..... then.... Is there anything that cannot be called beautiful? You are the sweetest of all..... never can u be a bad omen...

heart breaking. She has beauty that her family doesn't see or treasure.