Friday, June 28, 2013

I Would Rather Be A Gypsy Comments

Rating: 4.6

I love gypsies wandering vintage lands,
With Nature they are perfectly blend.

They may not have read the scripture,
Their vision civilization hasn’t blurred.
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C. P. Sharma
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Manonton Dalan 15 November 2015

me too, so I won't be paying taxes, mortgage, utilities and others that these people are trying to collect from me

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Heather Wilkins 15 July 2013

I would rather be a gypsy who sings than all the wealth that nature brings. good thought

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Shahzia Batool 07 July 2013

The first read... and wordsworth came to mind with his nature sonnet THE WORLD IS TOO MUCH WITH US...where he laments over the shortage of time in man's life to enjoy the beauty of nature, he wishes exactly in the same vein in his times as you wished now: Great God! I'd rather be A Pagan suckled in a creed outworn; So might I, standing on this pleasant lea, Have glimpses that would make me less forlorn; Have sight of Proteus rising from the sea; Or hear old Triton blow his wreathed horn. V.Good poem indeed!

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Ramesh Rai 07 July 2013

I would rather be a gypsy who sings Of all the wealth that Nature brings. beautiful write

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A desperate introspection smeared poem.I like it and give 10

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Hazel Durham 29 June 2013

Freedom at its best with nature as your friend, living without the search for success, life is like a flowing river cooling the senses, breathing the fresh air and going with the flow! Beautiful write!

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Valsa George 29 June 2013

A life of uninhibited freedom and unfettered thought with better vision learned from Nature and the ability to see light at the tunnels end make gypsy life covetable! Enjoyed the poem!

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David Wood 29 June 2013

I love the last line, a delightful poem, thanks.

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Yasmin Khan 28 June 2013

You seem to be charmed by gypsy life, no doubt they are nearer to crude Nature than us, a good write about nomads.

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Rubab Atwal 28 June 2013

nice poetry........pleasant to read

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Gajanan Mishra 28 June 2013

what is our freedom with all strife. good write. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

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