Tuesday, October 6, 2020

I Would Like To See The Brilliant Sun In The Sky Comments

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I would like to see the brilliant sun in the sky,
That never wanes,
I'd like to walk on love's path and go up high,
But never come down again,
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Mohammad Younus
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Luis Estable 06 October 2020

This poem has writing that is not bad as writing, but about a death that is deathless? Then, it is or was not dead after all. The can never be deathless, the same way that life cannot be lifeless unless one is being extremely metaphorical here.

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