I Would Like To See The Brilliant Sun In The Sky Poem by Mohammad Younus

I Would Like To See The Brilliant Sun In The Sky

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I would like to see the brilliant sun in the sky,
That never wanes,
I'd like to walk on love's path and go up high,
But never come down again,
I'd like to hear music of love sounding in my soul,
That never stops,
I would like to get flashes of light on my eyes,
That never fade;
I'd like to be Adam of the Eden again,
And never go against lord's command,
I'd like to embrace death itself,
And die- when my eyes close-
A deathless death.

Mykoul

I Would Like To See The Brilliant Sun In The Sky
Tuesday, October 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luis Estable 06 October 2020

This poem has writing that is not bad as writing, but about a death that is deathless? Then, it is or was not dead after all. The can never be deathless, the same way that life cannot be lifeless unless one is being extremely metaphorical here.

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