Friday, August 14, 2009

I Would If Only I Could Comments

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If I could I would hold you forever,
Only to release if the pain of the world goes.
If I could I would entertain you day and night
Even to simply count your growing fingers and toes.
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Rhiannon Scase
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HaZeM PaKKaR 14 August 2009

deeply impressive.. tenderly expressive.. a new MasterPiece has been added to MyPoemList.. if i have a child, i will dedicate such a lovely poem to him / her.. thanks for sharing! !

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Rhiannon Scase

Rhiannon Scase

Castleford, West Yorkshire
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