Monday, June 19, 2006

I Would Have Lived Comments

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I would have lived,
I would have sung.
May have been your best friend,
but instead you have no-one.
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>Starr Williams<
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Christian Eliab Ratnam 28 June 2006

WOW! ! ! A sensitive topic indeed...I am glad you had the courage to touch on it. Well, fabulous work in a poets perspective as well as in a Christian's perspective. Continue what you are doing and I assure you, you'll bless many more people. Great Write! ! ! All the best for your future endeavours!

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Mary Nagy 28 June 2006

A very tough topic Starr. I imagine this one touched many.....even many that may not have commented. Very powerful words to reach people. Sincerely, Mary

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Dee Daffodil 25 June 2006

Starr, I like the fact that you can write from a different perspective..it's refreshing and enjoyable. Important message...one that carries a lot of weight. Not always an easy decision for someone to make... Hugs, Dee

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Duncan Wyllie 25 June 2006

A very profound poem, very deeply felt, many make this decision when young and cannot possibly know what it means Love Duncan X

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Patricia Gale 19 June 2006

The haunting of decisions made. Well worded to receive the message. Patricia Gale

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Sandra Fowler 19 June 2006

What could have been...this thought should haunt us all forever. A very poignant write, Starr. Warm regards, Sandra

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