Wednesday, December 28, 2005

I Wont Forget Comments

Rating: 3.7

Destiny he calls it as he walks out the door
for queen and for country and for ever more
I have to do my bit he says as he walks through the gate
I run out to stop him, but he's gone and Im too late
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Rosa Mayfair
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Sandra Fowler 29 December 2005

This is a fine, sensitive effort. Because of your gift for painting vivid word portraits, this young man lives on in a poem. Keep up the good work. Regards, Sandra Fowler

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Ruby Dodd 28 December 2005

Excellent as the family member of military personnel i uunderstand completely

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Rosa Mayfair

Rosa Mayfair

a hospital (hahaha so funny, not)
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