Friday, November 23, 2007

I Wont Be Your Victim Comments

Rating: 5.0

You saw my heart, broken on the floor;
You slowly turned and sauntered, heading towordw the door;
You could hear the sound, of my life crashing down on me,
This was a sight you thought, that you just had to see.
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Dwayne Bailey
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Marieta Maglas 24 October 2009

excellent sad abstract poem, deep ideas well embedded, thank you for sharing..........10+++++

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Amanda Bailey 15 December 2007

amazing i can really relate to this i feel as though this piece brings to light what so many people including myself want to do, but just don't have the strength. great job

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Dwayne Bailey

Dwayne Bailey

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