Saturday, April 26, 2014

I Wonder Why Comments

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A cooing dove sang to us
As we sat beneath our tree
I wonder if the dove could see
That the limbs of the tree
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Lento Maez
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Lawerence Mize 03 May 2014

Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Miroslava Odalovic 03 May 2014

Cute :) . Btw I have recently learned that 'dove' is also the past tense of dive, was so surprised to find out. Anyways, bookmarked :)

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Sandra Feldman 28 April 2014

Just Love Ly! Really inspired!

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Khairul Ahsan 26 April 2014

Oh! So wonderful, Lento! You sure play magic with words. 'I wonder if the dove could see That the limbs of the tree Reflected you and me' - What a wonderful thought to muse on! 'They played our song All night long Our love The dove Our song ' - Simply fabulous! 'Keep on keeping on', my friend!

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