~i Wonder If You Love Me~ Comments

I don't think you need to wonder Mary not with that lovely man you've got there. Lovely poem, I like ' I wonder' as a centre to the verses. Love Ernestine XXX

A lovely expression of self doubt. The question is always about how we feel rather than how others feel about us. In this sense the theme is a perfect one because as creators we use our work as a relationship between us and our audience. Nicel done Mary.

How could anybody not? Perhaps, just perhaps, if such questions do not arise to oneself, tis a sign that the intensity of love is dimming. A lovely and loving, bittersweet, truthful piece.

I doubt there is a married person in the whole wide world who hasn't felt this same way, wondering, wondering - Sad, sort of lonely, wanting to know and afraid to ask Good work, Mary.

I wonder... if you could choose again would I still be your wife? i believe that was my favorite part to this poem.. i agree VERY well constructed.... i blieve that many ppl could relate 2 this.. ppl who dont necessarily have husbands.. or dont have wives.. ppl in a relationship.. and i mean a serious relationship.. could relate 2 it.. ppl who say i love u 2 that special sm1.. here it bak.. and they both really meant it.. could relate to 2 it... : -) .. i liked: -) .. it was nice.. *dont stop writing*: -) -debbie: -)

Well constructed and to the point, So many questions.