I Wonder Comments

I love the forthright tone of love and longing in this poem.

I read this poem several times. I was about to send you 'correctness' on language use. AND then I got caught up in the repetitiveness of...'I wonder what it be like...? ' I think you have written something that is very 'current' in terms of being 'real' with what's felt oppose to delivering what's expected. This is a very good poem. Congratulations. L