Wednesday, September 11, 2019

I Wonder Comments

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I wonder when I see monkeys engaged in a dog-fight,
And an wolf approaching to the monkeys,
With an intention of killing the both fighters,
And what else is the wolf other than poverty,
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 September 2019

Nuclear war would be the most disastrous and fearsome war ever, that will bring an end to the universe. A powerful forecast of the future. I shudder to think of the plight of the future generation. So aptly expressed through the picture of two fighting monkeys. Brilliant poem Akhtar Sahab! ......10

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Akhtar Jawad 13 September 2019

We are helpless in the hands of nature. Shiva has to open his third eye. Population has now touched the limits.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 September 2019

A perceptive, thought provoking and powerful write. Liked the closure line. A great poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 September 2019

A poignant write but there is a possibility we will suffer this predicament due to nuclear war. The world will be in a state of nothingness. I hope and pray the children will be spared

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