Sunday, June 2, 2013

I Wonder Comments

Rating: 4.3

I wonder,
I wonder if this life is life at all;
if it's a dream, then I may fall.
The feelings I embrace may be false;
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Adam M Snow
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Peter Stavropoulos 06 June 2015

The last two lines are very powerful, Adam. All the best, Peter.

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Rajesh Thankappan 28 January 2015

Life is surreal in more than one sense. Loved it.

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Cosmic Dreamer 02 June 2013

If life is but a dream and I am not real, When I read your poem why do I feel. Like the words you wrote massage my soul, And caress my heart making me whole... The wonder of life may well have no answers... I enjoyed your poem...

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Nabila ima 02 June 2013

I like this poem and want to read more new poem

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Gajanan Mishra 02 June 2013

dream is real, let us see, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Farah Ilyas 02 June 2013

Memories I hold dear, thoughts of fear: Are they all that which they seem, a fragments of a shattered dream? .. vivid theme, having desire to found the meaning of life, yearn to love & to be loved eternally...nice poem with the best rhyme & rhythmic scheme, , , , , keep sharing

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Adam M Snow

Adam M Snow

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