Sunday, May 9, 2010

I Wonder... Comments

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They say that my lines
convey serenity, peace, harmony.
But I wonder: does it inhabit in those thoughts
some fantasy? A little of bravery?
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Maria C. Pires Costa
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Amitava Sur 01 December 2013

Maria - a good topic you raised. I believe that since we have to live with both joy & pain, forcibly we agree & draw a balance of agreement.. Truly joy can not remove the pain & the the pains you had reduces the joy. But still we leave that's the wonder...... good topic with thoughtful lines.

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Kesav Easwaran 20 May 2010

yes...that belief...that makes us walk along...through all this illumination and shadows good poem Maria...sensible thoughts...well composed...10

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